Contents page draft 2

 

So this is my updated draft of my previous contents page.After uploading the last one i went on to notice a few problems that made it look messy.As ive carried the same masthead through from the front page the yellow colour i used initially was alot brighter than the one i planned to use on my contents page.So i decided to change the lighter yellow i was using to a more vibrant one to make it all flow evenly. I also added an issue number at the top,and added a 'contents' title as i feel it made it stand out what this page was about more.Looking back now i feel ive done the right thing by changing the yellow colour to match the rest,small details like this can make a huge difference.

Contents page draft

FINAL FRONT COVER

Front cover draft 3

So this is an extension on the previous draft i uploaded.I liked the way i laied everything out so decided to work on the same frame but chnage things up in order to see how they looked.As you can see i added the issue number of the magazine the price;and day of release just above the barcode. I then changed the text for the models name 'Ellie Jay' to a completely different style i imported this text from " www.cooltext.com" i liked the way it looked,i feel it loked really girly and fit very well with the model.In the feedback i was told to maybe change up the texts and vary them so they arnt all the same,so i feel by adding this style of text is emphasises the name of the model and just generally looks really nice.I then went on to highlight some key words with a different colour so they stood out,i did this so the most important words stood out to the reader more.I also change the 'fashion' part of the slogan to a blue colour so all the colours used on the fornt cover were incorporated within this.

Front cover draft 2

This is my second front cover draft,after i got feedback from my teacher on my first one i wanted to improve it alot .I took into consideration the feedback and changed the elements which pulled my grade down.I also felt it didn't look very realistic it looked abit all over the place asif if parts where just almost stuck on,i wanted it to flow better and look more like a magazine.So this is my improvement on the first one.